Determined, she turned her back on the precipice.
The wind played truant with her hair; and her heart, with her.
She closed her eyes; her keen ears drinking in the sounds around her.
A bird calling, the soft whisper of the trees, and most of all, the loud silence
The beating of her own heart, a bee buzzing nearby--life all around her.
She closed her mind, and taking a deep breath,
With her arms wide open, she took the final plunge
Into the black depths of nothingness...
5 comments:
LOVE IT!!
and the iamge tht jumps into mind is bella jumping from the cliff!!
it could be ur very state of mind i know.. but amazingly well written!!!
muah... thanks sweetie.. wasnt thinking of Bella though...:) and the image is so clear in my mind... i wish i could paint :( even the prev blog...
oh my god...the poetess in you has just evolved! i love it....could so connect to it. i really really found it very deep and intense. keep writing like this...you seem to have inspiration now...as long as writing doesnt depress you, you can write all you want!!! mwah!! xxx
the best english poetry i hv read so far,....swear it...i mean i swear i cudnt understand those lit poetries...yahaan pe dictionary ki jaroorat padi ;) coz u knw my english...m nt so fluent.but then i loved the meaning. ..i mean it smoothly flowing...n the whole scenario cud be visualized...love u darling ..so proud of u!!!
honeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy u re sooooooooooo good u shud publish:) mwahaaaaaaaaaa love ya
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